2nd Time Say Guitar =D

please rate and comment even if it is not good enough. i just need your help to find out the mistakes i've done! and i have no idea what happen to the ending. it was jus cut short and don't mind the computer saying anything. i was on teamspeak with aris lol

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G9n62iA4ZB4 <-- link for youtube